Open Poetry #26 |
knuckles worn |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Painted white knuckles that rap upon your cold wood unanswered undecided over fear but i feel it anyway. Fully aware of my leaves falling faster your meaning withers the days i spend hoping upturning in their place in memories avenue. Roots are cut and outstreched arms reclined i am fallen among beauty still standing in awe regardless of how my beats upon oak cease. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Great writing as usual gemma |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Gemjop, this is awesomely done! It really is! I love it so much! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Roots are cut and outstreched arms reclined i am fallen among beauty still standing in awe regardless of how my beats upon oak cease. There is so much wisdom in this, Gemma. I really do like this write. I sure am glad to see you here, friend. Hope to see you again soon. Heart hugs to you from me Ethel (did you check your e-mail?) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-20-2003 12:10 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness gemma . . . this one I KNOW *shudders* intense write here missy darkly beautiful . . . amazing xxoo |
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