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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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In Spill my love pours into your hands a generous amount of liquid silver that seeps through fingers wasted on the floor |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I can understand this completely. only just the other day I admitted to somone I liked him. He didn't laugh or anything he just let it go. I think I would rather he laughed, at least then he would have reacted. I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ouch, Helen. I felt that. It does hurt when somebody doesn't return love the same way you give it.  "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nicely done |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I've felt this many times before and sadly others have also felt this from me. This is well said, Helen, you just keep getting better and better. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mercury...fun but toxic...isn't everything? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: I like this side of you . . . ahhh . . . the duality is precious brilliant write Lady xxoo |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed... It should be held more carefully within cupped hands...  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
really like this |
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