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rynnio12
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0 posted 2003-05-18 09:15 PM


You were jealous, of our towers tall, our control of the world, and our wealth.  You believed fear could makes us lose them all.  You told your people it was good and “for the cause”.  When you boarded those airplanes, you thought it was victory, instead only defeat lie ahead.  Once you struck those two towers of the World Trade Center it was only fear and dismay for America.  Your plan backfired and caused the people of America to rise together beneath those colors, Red, White, and Blue.  Within a month we were amongst your towns and your cities, your homes and your apartments.  We rounded up any of your comrades waiting to strike us.  We have conquered you Al-Qaeda and those heartless terrorists who used merely 2 Airplanes and your lives, to take 3,00 lives.  We are America and you are Terrorism.
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Voiceless
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1 posted 2003-05-18 09:47 PM


Very true, we did come back in a way
they could have never expected.
Welcome to PIP.
You have a great start here!
Can't wait to read more of your thoughts!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-05-19 04:10 AM




(wipes tears) Indeed it will be a gray day in our history forever, nevertheless we only grew stronger after that tragedy and showed exactly what those colors can mean for everyone, sadly there are still many who warp the red into crimson and the white into ivory but in the end all can be forgiven and freedom will be known by all, God Bless You and good luck on this project, this is a powerfully heartfelt debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-19 04:44 AM


indeed, a good write.
Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-05-20 06:20 AM


Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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5 posted 2003-05-20 06:52 AM


Welcome to PIP 12!

Ahh I see we have ourselves a philosopher
of sorts . . .

you will blend nicely
nice entrance
xxoo

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