Open Poetry #26 |
My Incredible Man |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
the first time I ever set eyes on you I fell hopelessly in love I knew for years you were out there but had to wait for my turn how could anyone who ever met you not see you as special before you, I thought I knew so much so much about life, so much about loving but daily you have taught me I knew nothing you saw through my mistakes and held me high in my flaws unconditional love is so fleeting but in this world I feel it I know it, I really know it with you I am never alone you have taken my heart and taken me to heights I have never imagined how many heart beats have I counted in your presence and how I have breathed you in I have watched you as you dreamed wondering if they were big and colorful you showed me the path to believe in things you made me even believe in me I live such an enchanted life and am truly charmed and all because of you today you take away my breath just as you did the day we met my incredible man, my son Happy Birthday Brian, Happy Birthday love you, mom [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (05-18-2003 11:11 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The love of a woman is such a marvelous gift. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful tribute, Helen. I'm sure he adores you too and knows how lucky he is to have you as his mom, his friend. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a loving message to a son!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank you...he is 24 today and he is incredible...i have 2 sons...and wonder how i ever got so lucky to have 2 men that will love me no matter who i am or what i do for a lifetime...just the thought of it brings me to tears...h |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
What a gift from mother to son..absolutley beautiful and moving |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
darn they grow up fast |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous writing...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - Happy Birthday, Brian... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, You had me till the end, beautiful write, enjoyed. |
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