Open Poetry #26 |
Lost Parts |
LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
You drown down I hold your face to the ground And here I shout About the way you've treated me I sufficate In the pool of tears you made Deep inside of me I throw you in my hate How could you be this The person I once idlized I can't seem to see In the same shadows of the past Now for every scar That lies across my arms Is just another time You took me for granite I walk myself to a moments finish And wait until a minutes end To see you will not ever change To see you are lost parts of me |
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SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
"Is just another time You took me for granite" I think you meant "granted" Its a great write.. Very deep and well written |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
well written thoughts. It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I KNOW what you mean! damn, this is good! |
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