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dreambuilder
Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack

0 posted 2003-05-18 06:19 PM




Life long dream
Given up
till...
Her

I call her
Destiny

Perfection,
Angels pale
in her presence

Passion,
Hells heat
can't compare

Power,
To change me
where God could not

Beauty,
Even Heaven
envies

Soul,
Second
only to christ

She devours me
completely
completing me


I called her
Destiny

Perhaps she is
just a dream

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-05-18 07:13 PM



dreams become reality
duality
of thought and hope
entwined
in mind
and heart
she enters
shining
like the facets of a stone
not alone
a knight
by her side
astride
he takes her
caressing
her face
he
kisses her hand

oh - so gently

stand
together
as one
stake your claim
to fame
silver and gold
foretold
your fortune

she awaits you . . .


This is beautiful dream . . .
you deserve her . . .  she sounds amazing
surreal . . .
may she exist for you
xxoo


[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-18-2003 07:18 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-05-18 08:46 PM


. . . needed to breathe . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-18-2003 08:50 PM).]

dreambuilder
Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack
3 posted 2003-05-18 08:52 PM


A knight
A princess
not a fairytale
but a love
beyond measure

We are here
to rescue eachother
from self imposed prisons

Freeing one another
to experience passion
love & each other
as no one has ever dared

Soulmates
& lovers
we complete
the other

She is
my Queen
my Goddess
I worship her

Humbled to be
her adoring servant
for all eternity

---------------------------------------------------

I love/hate when you reply
as your replies are often
more beautiful than my poem

but I am humbled
by your gracious words
which bring light
to my simple posts
thank-you Littlewing


[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (05-18-2003 08:54 PM).]

SparkleeLipGloss
Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19
Arizona, USA
4 posted 2003-05-18 11:52 PM


Amazing.. Just... amazing..
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
5 posted 2003-05-19 12:29 PM


very nice reading and write!!!  

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-05-19 01:55 AM


A beautiful thread of poetry all around
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2003-05-19 04:52 AM


just gorgeous! I'm glad I stopped in
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
8 posted 2003-05-19 09:30 AM


simple posts?

this . . . I highly doubt, my friend . . .

dreambuilder
Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack
9 posted 2003-05-20 06:02 PM


sparklee - thank you - nice to see a new name

QJQ - always nice to see your replies

raph - thanks for reading & the nice reply my friend - hope all is going well for you

shadows - I love seeing you reply to my writes - thankyou

littlewing - I appreciate you my dear friend - You always praise my poetry - not to mention you are one of the sweetest people I have had the privalage to encounter

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