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Destiny ?
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Destiny ? |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack 
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Life long dream Given up till... Her I call her Destiny Perfection, Angels pale in her presence Passion, Hells heat can't compare Power, To change me where God could not Beauty, Even Heaven envies Soul, Second only to christ She devours me completely completing me I called her Destiny Perhaps she is just a dream . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dreams become reality duality of thought and hope entwined in mind and heart she enters shining like the facets of a stone not alone a knight by her side astride he takes her caressing her face he kisses her hand oh - so gently stand together as one stake your claim to fame silver and gold foretold your fortune she awaits you . . . This is beautiful dream . . . you deserve her . . . she sounds amazing surreal . . . may she exist for you xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-18-2003 07:18 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . needed to breathe . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-18-2003 08:50 PM).] |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
A knight A princess not a fairytale but a love beyond measure We are here to rescue eachother from self imposed prisons Freeing one another to experience passion love & each other as no one has ever dared Soulmates & lovers we complete the other She is my Queen my Goddess I worship her Humbled to be her adoring servant for all eternity --------------------------------------------------- I love/hate when you reply as your replies are often more beautiful than my poem but I am humbled by your gracious words which bring light to my simple posts thank-you Littlewing [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (05-18-2003 08:54 PM).] |
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SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
Amazing.. Just... amazing.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice reading and write!!!  It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
A beautiful thread of poetry all around |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just gorgeous! I'm glad I stopped in |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
simple posts? this . . . I highly doubt, my friend . . . |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
sparklee - thank you - nice to see a new name QJQ - always nice to see your replies raph - thanks for reading & the nice reply my friend - hope all is going well for you shadows - I love seeing you reply to my writes - thankyou littlewing - I appreciate you my dear friend - You always praise my poetry - not to mention you are one of the sweetest people I have had the privalage to encounter |
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