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| Open Poetry #26 |
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Chapter Of Time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Chapter Of Time I can’t pour my heart out on the page, something inside says it just won’t work. It won’t help to drown the memories nor will it wash away all of the hurt. There is just silence surrounding me as it is all slowly sinking in, that perhaps what was there, never was and there was no way either one of us could win. I’m not sure how to write it out and I’m not sure how I should feel and I’m not sure of one single damn thing or what is and isn’t, or ever was real. Will these be my final written words and have I just written my last rhyme? I don’t know, for I have no answers… but the final page has turned on that chapter……of time. I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-18-2003 01:40 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
There you are dear Donna!! I believe you will be writing your beautiful poetry forever. This is lovely and from your heart. I do hope all is well with you. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris, Im gonna be just fine. Hugs... I must have had my momma's will |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Donna~ This is such an honest poem, your writing is lovely and so full of emotion. I hope you will give it time, and let your feelings run their course. I really do understand this, and I feel your pain. I'll keep you in my thoughts, hugs~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Donna...Writing from your heart and feelings, though sad, is good to read you. "I’m not sure how to write it out and I’m not sure how I should feel and I’m not sure of one single damn thing or what is and isn’t, or ever was real." I've felt this way more than once...and one thing I found out about me...I will alway write it out as long as I have breath and pen.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
maybe we are living parallel lives.... A beautiful flow to your words, Donna hugssss M |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"There is just silence surrounding me as it is all slowly sinking in, that perhaps what was there, never was and there was no way either one of us could win." ~ This was my favorite part. While reading this...I was there where whatever what was, was not. An excellent flowing write. Enjoyed! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - keep writing it out just like you have here, as it helps, it helped me... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Just write each single interlude one at a time, sweet friend, in the end you'll see the jigsaw fits together! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-18-2003 06:17 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've had my moments when I questioned if something that was happening was real or not...I determined that it was real...a real bad situation...at those times it hurts...but it also is like coming to a fork in the road and you find yourself knowing which way to go...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thoughts and feelings written are ways to remember history after you write them let it be a mystery. Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...I know...I feel that too |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing, what happens when we write the final chapter on certain parts of our lives ourselves - some few things are under our control - knowing when something is over and going forward is definitely one of those parts that we can accept - or fight. That we are usually responsible for more than just ourselves, it always takes some courage to know when to put the pen down and close the book. But it's the opening of a new book, and taking a fresh pen, that then becomes the real challenge. I'm looking forward to your new challenges! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
As a chapter closes, another unfolds - and I'll surely be looking for the next...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You're going to be okay Donna.. And please keep writing..never ever give that up! ~Be well...be happy..Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You remind me of me... Walking through life by feel...using good sense to steer those sandles. Not an easy task to understand what cannot be explained. Wonderful expressions of the heart Donna. Hugs, TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
i liked the title  enjoy your read |
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