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whiskey
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0 posted 2003-06-02 10:28 PM



This poem was written about my mum and how special my childhood was

" Seeing Eyes "

Visions dancing
Across my mind
Seeing you
Holding me

Pictures Seen
Inside my head
Seeing you
Kissing me

Sight felt
With in my brain
Seeing you
Guiding me

Memory Flooding
Into my thought
Seeing you
Loving me




"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

[This message has been edited by whiskey (06-02-2003 10:30 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-06-02 10:30 PM


This is just beautiful. Makes me think of Liam

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-06-02 10:37 PM


Ahhh..such a loving write...much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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with you
3 posted 2003-06-02 11:01 PM


I just spoke with my mom today, good thing or this would have had me off the computer and calling her this is wonderful
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4 posted 2003-06-02 11:21 PM


This is heartfelt and touching.  Everyone should have such admiration for their mom.
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5 posted 2003-06-03 02:53 AM


very touching
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