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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-04-17 06:56 AM

Please Stand Still

there is so much
in touching silence
that I wish
I could know
what it felt like
but everything
continues to whirl
around me
it is as if
even when the wind
has stopped
everything still
just goes
passing by

life
Junior Member

since 2003-04-14

Posts 36
India

1 posted 2003-04-17 07:20 AM

Wooooow
left me thinkin for a while...
as if i was dere...n the wind hissing by
nice one

luvs
life

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2003-04-17 07:31 AM

Standing still
Despite the pushing
Standing still
In spite of rushing
The beach constantly move
Waves in motion
Sand in motion
Wearing the tidal groove
Standing ankle high
Waves in motion
Go rushing by me
Pulling into the sea
Yet I stand still

Gloom

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2003-04-17 09:59 AM

Silence
powerful word
in poetry

Thomas

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-04-17 12:21 PM

ah some things seem never to stand still..
enjoyed...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-04-17 01:14 PM

1slick_lady
Perhaps it's best to go with the wind, enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-04-17 01:16 PM

ah...*big smile*

That Voice
Junior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 34

7 posted 2003-05-17 09:47 PM

Swish,
always hear that wind
breezes blowing through my hair
as I stop and bend,
but you see I don’t really care
‘cause the flowers scent the air
and for that, I’ll pause

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-05-18 12:59 PM

yeah...that's what it feels like, exactly!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2003-05-18 08:25 AM

Sometimes we cause our own whirlwinds... I know I have to slow myself down from time to time... This is a find write, H...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-05-18 06:44 PM

it is as if
even when the wind
has stopped
everything still
just goes
passing by

Yep, pretty much defined MY life!
Very nice!

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