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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-05-18 02:50 AM

Stripping down reality
to the bone
subjective perspective
universalized packaging
for your enjoyment
take the red pill
follow the white rabbit
to the world beneath ideal
cogs in the machine
feeding political egos
giving false promises like candy
breeding apathy
forever moving in place
Only you can choose to be free
down the rabbit hole
fly with me
beware truth isn't pretty
with shiny bows
but its far better cry
then the societial slavery
we now live

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2003-05-18 03:14 AM

Amen to that.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

A2J
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since 2002-11-22

Posts 43
South Africa

2 posted 2003-05-18 03:42 AM

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-05-18 03:58 AM

Brad this is powerful and heartfelt .... sadly true. Food for thought.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-18 04:04 AM

the truth is never pretty, never

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2003-05-19 03:45 AM

Man, did you ever write and say a lot in this piece. So concisely too.

She goes running for the shelter
of her mother's little helper
And it gets her on her way
gets her through her busy day

Yeah things are more plastic than ever. Thank the stars there's some humane people still left out there like the people on this poetry board.
A very intelligent write!

Eric

[This message has been edited by ethome (05-19-2003 03:46 AM).]

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

6 posted 2003-05-19 04:22 AM

Can hear this...sounds like you been sleeping on that surrealistic pillow.enjoyed as always.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-05-19 04:25 AM

well written and a good read

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

8 posted 2003-05-19 02:13 PM

thank you

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-05-20 06:18 AM

truth for me every time Brad . . .

insightful write - brilliant
xxoo

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