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Silence |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Can you hear it ? Hear that sound The one that consumes Me all around The sound of silence Engulfing me No noise I hear I never have Vibrations felt All through my hands Treat me different Please do not For I can see And I can touch I have a gift It came from god I was given life For me to live I do my best The best I can With what I have Not what I lack So when you see me Look within Inside of me The same I am |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I do my best The best I can With what I have Not what I lack That verse speaks to me and could very well stand alone~ *enjoyed* |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i really enjoyed this write!!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sometimes silence roars. I like this poem a lot. Thank you for sharing it here. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And I truly wish for many others to get to see exactly how you want to be seen as we love you for who you are and nothing more and nothing less! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the title caught me...enjoyed the read |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
I wonder sometimes if natural silence would be better than being able to hear. There are things I would miss either way. Love this.  Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I heard that .... and was touched. Good writing!! |
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A2J Junior Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 43South Africa |
great poem. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful and touching. You see in the silence you found beauty. It radiates through you and it is noticed.... and you vibrate in love. Love, Margherita |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, Julie - I'm sending this link to my sister, who has a profoundly deaf son. He's surely one for making the best of every moment of his life - and I know she'll love your verse...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How true it is...look inside, you will find a treasure... Kinda like look inside this poem, where you find one as well... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
whiskey, your silence is heard, you are one a little different as we all are in some way, your gift to us is you, your sharing, your caring and time. I enjoyed this, thank you, take care. Silence is golden as your post here. Sincerely Rick |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Silence never sounded as beautiful as it does here. Thank you...I shall never hear silence the same way again. So touching... -Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Julie, this is terrific snd so very touching. Thank you for sharing. Maree |
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