Open Poetry #26 |
Passover Morning |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The moon peeked in through window pane balanced high on cottonwood’s scraggling limb then held onto my sigh…so cruel that beauty is here, just for thee, just one… but welcome, April’s fool…. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-17-2003 07:56 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea: this is beautiful - stunning - yet . . . bittersweet amazing reading as I watch the sunrise xxoo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I wish some way we could really commune with la luna...or maybe we do with writes like this? KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are more than just a fine poetess. You are songstress for your words always sing to my soul... Love & Light, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! Beautiful my friend! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely..such beautiful words.. ~Smiles and hugs to you hip-sis~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now see, Karilea, you just painted another picture...right here in my mind's eye. Thank you for these beautiful images in my mind. Hugs, Ethel |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karilea, this is simply beautiful and I like how you italicized(sp) the speaking moon here. Wonderful as usual and I love the format as well. Maree |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How'd you know? I was just discussing symbolism of the Star of David, and how it has some interesting roots of origen. This is lovely and very astute for those that have understanding eyes to read. I tip my witch's hat to ya! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I think the moon more fool than you could ever be. |
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