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P.R.C
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since 2003-01-31
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Hull, England

0 posted 2003-05-17 04:31 PM


You have forgiven him again
Like so many times before
He will never quit playing his game
Each time doing more
But still you forgive him

I do one thing wrong
You blame me forever
I can only put up with you for so long
Making me hate you, i will stop never
Everytime you mention it
Again Im the bad one, putting up with it

Well dont come running to me
Next time he hurts you
Ive tried to make you see
But now I dont care
You were never there
When I needed you
So why should I help you through

You forgive him over and over
Complaining about him to everyone you see
All along ignoring and not loving me
Im always the one who makes you mad
While you are making me sad

I cry inside
Hiding my feelings from you
I try to fool myself into thinking
That I dont need you to make it through
Making me want to leave everthing
Why do you keep forgiving youre golden boy son
Hes not your only child, though you seem to forget
That you have another one

I deny Ive got a brother
Hating my family
I dont need another
I will fail by myself
None of you see
That Im already cold
Frozen from you, each day my feelings getting old

I wish you would just, one time
Make him pay, for everything he has done
I have the power, Ill make revenge mine
Then I will be gone
You will all pay for what you made me into
My hate gets me through

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-17 07:36 PM


Making him pay...
will never offer you the one compensation/reward you seek.
Sad, but it's the bare bones truth.
Heart hugs if this write is about you.

SparkleeLipGloss
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since 2003-05-18
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Arizona, USA
2 posted 2003-05-18 11:37 PM


Very.. deep.. Nice write..
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-19 04:58 AM


dang, that's sad...nice ending though...
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