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Recitation |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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In the thirty-second floor apartment, where the night made the city my stadium, on the balcony, I recited ardently my poetry to the new millennium. The towering skyline diminished. All five boroughs were crammed in my iris and the buildings, long after I finished, held their windows lit up like lighters. Check out my poetry here: |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I can see the picture that you painted so well. I really enjoyed this, and loved your metaphor with the ligthers, terrific! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Holding up my lighter. Jason |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ahhhh beautiful. Maree  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Someone is always out there listening. I love this...most especially, the ending. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Been a while since I've had the pleasure of reading your stuff. You're still great! Core |
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