this ones for the SUV, clone, flag spinners

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Open Poetry #26

this ones for the SUV, clone, flag spinners

Drexler_McStyles
Member

since 2002-11-18

Posts 195
Venice, Ca

0 posted 2003-05-17 01:51 AM

here I come and go
the baggage weighs lots
spitting verses out like they were cabbage
I got living stones in jars and pots…..

I have the oven on
at 350 degrees
to bake the tar out of
some frozen macaroni and cheese

I have rum and some embalming fluid
to set the smog alight
I have gap tooth vixens
bartering a stay for the night

this work is tremendous
in the burden kind of sense
I might feel a little better
if the mediocrity
were not so entirely dense

Im not kicking flags
or tantalizing your inner drama
im not worried about the semicolons
or the pursuant of the comma

if youre out there
misses; I cant be reached
then take these letters down
to where the seam cant be beseeched

goodnigth
spelling is such sweet sorrow
that I take a blackout
and take your word for it
tomorrow

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

1 posted 2003-05-17 12:06 PM

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-05-17 12:17 PM

LOL

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-17 02:08 PM

JP, I'm listening to a song by Tupac called Stay True, and that dancing baby along with this song just made me smile and start dancing too

anyhow, I love the poem here Steve

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (05-17-2003 02:08 PM).]

CaseyLeigh
Junior Member

since 2003-05-15

Posts 48

4 posted 2003-05-17 11:30 PM

i hope you're not having frozen mac and cheese tonight...

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