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Unfolding
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Unfolding |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Unfolding I wander in this night It’s so rare that I speak that I dare these words these meanings these longings... My chaos of thought my ordered world of fear the once restless voice of my muse, who dares to desert me a whimpered whisper now. I demand its attention there’s no romance tonight a sonnet I have not those fourteen lines I crave and no final couplet written, for my lack of you... Am I now the writer of once, or was, a genius of nothing in the glory of silent pages the author of invisible ink my book of empty poems a colossal work a colossal work There is a roaring sound advancing in the tides of the sea in the recesses of a mind and in this fog I await it these waves of words that will sail you to me... and a new story will unfold. James Parker Haley (c)2003 May 9th |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
Have you seen the movie "Adaptation"? As I read what you have wrote I think of Nic Cage's character struggling, struggling, to find the write mix of words he has in his mind. That's what I picture. As you think, and think some more, the final picture of what you're trying to say slowly comes into focus. Excellent! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well done! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Looking forward to the find once the unfolding has been performed |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This explains the lack of words and rhyme very well!!! Enjoyed!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful...so very very much enjoyed!!!!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
oh how this speaks to me! Enjoyed!  Sunkissed. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
j-oh-E, I haven't seen the movie yet, but will thank you for the read. passing shadows, thank you. Lady In White, hmmmm I like the way you say it... i'll need some help with that unfolding, Red Red where are you...lol Bridgette, for lack of a better word thank you. Enchantress, thank you so much. (smiles) Sunkissed, thank you. (smiles) Parker |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And as all the new words spew out on the shores, all it takes is putting them together as every ebb has a tendency to give us all we need but just shake it all up like a Yahtzee cup! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Noah, your response is always enjoyed. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
As usual Park, your words touch the soul. Bravo! Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good write and thoughts It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dee, sweet lass thank you very much. Q, thank you. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah! Somehow I just knew there was a Park poem floating around. I could feel it. Still sailing, still sailing. Hmmm. Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I'm in need of an Irish or Celtic name for my boat, got any ideas sweet poet. Thanks for the sweet reply, I was hopeing you'd appear.  Parker .... did I say that out loud. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Oh how good it is to read you..whether it be blue or bouncy matters not...there's just something warm about the read when reading a Parker poem... enjoyed, as usual my friend.. hugs, g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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