Open Poetry #26 |
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The Recluse Poet |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Winds of time, ghostly shadow of brilliance, stubborn will of reinforced concrete, hidden bruises of nonconformity, immovable mind to bend anymore, self exiled to loneliness. In a mountain stream so pure, the medicinal water baptizes, spirits renewal of pristine thoughts, treasure of a free mind, unhindered by societies conservative values to dam your works. From a landscape so vast, wilderness of the unknown, the flight of the phoenix learning from past failures, notched grooves of experience, wrinkled age of father time, an inner universe with no boundaries. Bandages of scars, tattoo the body, piercing’s of betrayed trust, true blue friends, stabbing your identify, wanting to knock you down from your special views, of inspirational wisdom. Crusty exterior of survival, showing no emotion, a gem of warmth within, so caring the tears hide, a heart of emotion silenced, the darkness of inner faith, within heaven’s special graces. Warrior of hurts, driven for the need of purpose, there is no miracle ahead, but the suicide of giving up, lies in never defeating yourself, in taking the gamble out of life, negativity wins the chemical imbalance. The battle of demons goes on, until words so deep come out of you, to set others believing the impossible, that a recluse mind, has a dangerous sting of truth serum, still able to open up closed minds, for a poet’s words breathes with them, beyond the dust they turn into. In their grave the world shall rumble, earthquakes shall shatter glass, cycles of minds will come and go, but a recorded masterpiece, may make a poet, finally rest in peace, as society struggles with the words that never could be extinguished. D.Lester Young 5/14/ to 5/14/03 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How perfectly said....each verse holds so much meaning. The pain that aches made me feel good in an odd way, perhaps because it speaks so clearly and unconditionally to me. I applaud you~ Bravo Sir~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-17-2003 12:25 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perhaps there's sound reasoning behind hermitage... Time to say the words that society shall never shed... I enjoyed this DL.. ![]() |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dave, Very powerful in such quiet ways. Enjoyed these thoughts greatly. Much meaning to me. Enjoyed, hope you are doing well. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well done, friend reclusiveness is not a character flaw |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice piece |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
DL each verse speaks volumes to me..... There's a lot of power in these words!!!! The truth of them sting!!!! Well Done!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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