Open Poetry #26 |
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Mystical Rains |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A hole, large enough to swallow suns Excavated one promise at a time Placed within the emptiness, a seed Meant to grow, a gift undaunted This moon, a holy nightlight Misted in her tears a garden drinks Tended to in gentle concentration Meant to soothe, a lullaby to sing And hope, the positive conductor Softly falling from a caring heart Filled within the emptiness a sea Meant to luster, stirring in the tides Harvested, a promise unforgotten Culled of meadow mornings dew Rained as summer sips, a potion Meant to taste, the filling in degrees Copyright Kkh 5/16/03 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write!!!! ![]() It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
ThisDiamond,very nice poem Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And hope, the positive conductor Softly falling from a caring heart Filled within the emptiness a sea Meant to luster, stirring in the tides You are so full of passion TD~ What more can I say! The beauty of your poetry is timeless. ~hugs~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful indeed |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, The imagery is great; this is so special. Puts tears in my eyes. It is lovely. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful...the images painted...linger long with the reader. Eric |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a beautiful flow in this one! |
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ffpercent243 Junior Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 37United Kingdom |
Ah, yes, have to stick this on our file, too structured a poem to critic after one read. The above alone, says it all. If I am silent, it is because I am thinking, if I do not talk, please do not think I am rude. |
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ffpercent243 Junior Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 37United Kingdom |
QUOTE/ And hope, the positive conductor Softly falling/UNQUOTE Should that be "Falls" or else "Is softly falling"? |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Homage to a very mystical, magical presence...very eloquently.. |
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