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Only Then |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is a moment...just after we part - The air holds your scent in a final embrace. There is a subtle sense of you that lingers. I step into this moment. Breathing you to the deepest part of me. Only then do I turn and walk away. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful! The memory of the scent lasts forever ..... breathing you to the deepest part of me A delightful write. Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional. TD |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Ahhhhh... Those moments bring brightness to the eyes and life to the spirit. Beauty-full. Etain says hello! |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
I love it. It's like a painted picture... you can really see it all as you read. Wonderful write! ~Kelly~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I have a feeling her scent will linger until you meet again. You writing is so sophisticated, Ericc. Ethereal, I dare say... You do it everytime! -Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Eric. I like very much!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very lovely and soft Ericc. enjoyed this with a slow smile. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ericc,great write I loved it Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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teledon Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 51Florida USA |
lovely! "breathing you into the deepest part of me" - what a great line - love the brevity of the poem - you show that much can be said in a few lines "keep it simple" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Exactly. You're wise and self-observing, and you have a gift for the music of short, ethereal imagery. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc Scent is one of the most romantic senses...you capture it beautifully! |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
The air is heavy and sweet with the fragrance of love. How beautiful... Thank you... I love you, Moca |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Eric, this is sadly beautiful, sweet friend, that feeling makes my eyes sting thinking about it, imagine that, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice, and calming to me tonight *s M |
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