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Open Poetry #26

Enraptured

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-05-16 06:07 PM

** ** ** **

Each thrill
Caressed in soft assure
Streams of dabbled thought
Trickling peaks and valleys
As warm as the bathe of sun
Shivered in returning favor
You are my delight

Copyright Kkh 5/16/03

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-05-16 06:38 PM

Delightful.
Love, Margherita

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-05-16 06:39 PM

This is so beautiful!
Eric

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-05-16 06:43 PM

ahhh~ so nice

M

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-05-16 06:46 PM

Clever....very! Nicely done and the
acrostic fits perfectly.....good job!

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

5 posted 2003-05-16 07:33 PM

nice,...very soothing
Joe

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-05-16 08:16 PM

enjoy your read

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-05-16 08:23 PM

Kathleen...this is really beautiful.
A wonderful acrostic.
So much said in so few words.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2003-05-16 09:17 PM

This is beautiful. I feel warm and serene.

-Patricia

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