Open Poetry #26 |
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The New Me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
The New Me I posted a new picture a new outlook want to be and just like all the rest of life it faded back to me. The old one, too naive, too true whose fantasy has died. I posted a new picture one of me, less to be tried. I know I took it yesterday when in a mood of new, and even several must have seen 'cause they gave it their review. I looked this morn and I was there, refreshed and feeling pink. But when the hours passed again the old me stole the link. I change so much from week to week depending on my feel. But honestly I posted me, the new me in the real. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
When I look into the picture of the new...I see the always...and she just becomes more beautiful with time. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
TD, really, I am seeing the old picture and I had uploaded a new one, that was there at least for a few hours...maybe it scared someone too much. I have no idea where I disappeared to. But thank you, your kind words awakened a smile in me today. ![]() M |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece. The old and the New mesh together into the now. Hopefully the now is a beautiful combination of both. Julie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Darn, if it didn't just show up, the new one I mean...maybe I am going crazy ![]() |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
All you can be is you. Beautiful write. Bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Julie, thank you for reading. This was just a silly poem, wondering where my new picture uploaded had disappeared to. But I see I returned in the new ![]() Thank you Bernie, I hope you are doing well. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-16-2003 11:02 AM).] |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"I change so much from week to week depending on my feel. But honestly I posted me, the new me in the real." ~ You may change from week to week, but one thing that hasn't changed is the fact that you are still a pretty lady. ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awww, now you have done it... twice in one day ![]() ![]() M |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ I see you ! Know what ? ... it's a GREAT picture ! But, of course, I KNOW what the REAL you looks like ... thanks to our gathering last September~ ![]() ![]() *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your pic--I like! ![]() What I really enjoy most about you and your writing is that both are real! God knows, there are just too many mirrors with shallow reflections out there! You are authentic and you laugh and you cry and you feel--and you are talented! ![]() Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Marge, but that Florida humidity never let my hair look good... It was a struggle to not look like a frizz bomb down there ![]() Thanks sweetie, hugsss M Linda, thank you. The other picture was about 2 years old already and I wasn't feeling so good about myself back then. Well I am as real as real gets,and sometimes I wish I could hide my feelings in my words, but like in real, I am not good at being "false" so I don't even try. (I can feel and look guilty even when I do nothing wrong) Thank you for reading this silly poem. I only posted it because I didn't want those who read the other poem from yesterday, to think I put the old picture back up. I appreciate your kind words. hugs Maureen vandana, there you are, always visiting me ![]() thank you ![]() M |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"the new me in the real" that is the only me that matters M. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen: your picture is absolutely beautiful! and I do know that feeling of hmmm . . . I found me! Just to have that old me tapping on my shoulder saying ummm . . here I am . . . regardless . . . you look beautiful inside and out xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
They don't matter. I've seen the real and your pics do not do you justice, no matter how good they are ![]() |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice poem, Lovely new picture, But as lovely as it is It pales beside the beauty of the inner you. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
What are you trying to do to me Deer? make me cry... you guys are sweet... and right back atcha I am always telling others (now don't laugh) how suave you were... well except when you fell through the mattress. ![]() ![]() M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write Maureen... And as I said in reply to your other post.. I love the new 'you'!! ![]() ~Hugs~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Wow !! again nice pic and thoughts ![]() It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to see the new you...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven "the new me in the real"...thanks. I posted a new pic of me yesterday and when it showed and then disappeared, I was wondering... And when I wonder, I always get myself into trouble. ![]() littlewing, haaa...well if I ever find myself tapping on my shoulder I may have to seek some help ![]() but I know what you mean. Thank you for your kind words. hugss M Dixie, of course you do...some day we shall have to meet. Professor, the poem was an afterthought, the picture, a new me. And I thank you for the compliment. I always wondered if you noticed the inner me. *s M Nancy, I sure feel good today, despite the downpouring. hugssss M QjQ, ~smiling~ a thank you, once again. M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JamesM, you are so sweet. Thank you, M |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL! Yep, suave is the first casualty when mattress-falling-through comes into play ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are too funny Michael. ![]() M |
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