Open Poetry #26 |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Good morning, my love... I awake with your name Dancing upon my lips. I wonder where you are Now that your spirit has left me And returned home. You touched me throughout the night Held me close to you, let me Breathe in your heavenly scent. It was magical, my love... I Never wanted to rise, knowing that You would once again leave me For reality. My love, sleep has never been So beautiful... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
cinnamongirl.......lovely, etherial quality to this spirit filled love poem. Enjoyed! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very lovely. Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful when sleep holds such sweetness ... Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
nice write I loved it Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Some very lovely lines here. I awake with your name dancing on my lips... My favorite. TD |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Naked souls touching Chains are smoke in cleansing wind Souls touched touch again. Thank you for sharing your poem. I enjoyed it. |
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teledon Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 51Florida USA |
imaginative and sweet .. paticularly like "your name dancing on my lips" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, beautiful! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This has a lovely ethereal quality - Nicely done, cg.. ![]() |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"I wonder where you are Now that your spirit has left me And returned home." ~ Equating the actual "being" with one's love as a spiritual experience is captured within this sentence. Enjoyed! |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, do I not know exactly what you mean.... So many solid new poets coming to this group, and I think I just added one to my must-read list. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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