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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-05-16 09:36 AM





~Shhhhhhhh, it is so peaceful here.
I tread the trails in quiet moccasins,
leaving not a sound ... but gathering thoughts~
May 2003



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2003-05-16 09:39 AM


beautiful .........

how you dress up nature with words...

wonderful!!!

regards,
sudhir

teenpoet
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2 posted 2003-05-16 09:40 AM


I think I like it.  It is nicely worded.

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

[This message has been edited by teenpoet (05-16-2003 09:41 AM).]

Betty
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3 posted 2003-05-16 09:54 AM


Very pretty place to gather your thoughts my friend.
Love ya,
Betty

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-05-16 10:01 AM


Shhh...right behind you.
(silent)Applause...TD

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-05-16 04:45 PM


Beautiful Marge...James
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-05-16 04:52 PM


I was in a place like this once...
it was a beautiful spot to rest.

hugsss
M

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7 posted 2003-05-16 07:12 PM


Dear Marge:  I know what "Hush Meadows" is like!  I have a spot like that myself. This is so pretty!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

vandana
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8 posted 2003-05-16 08:13 PM


enjoyed it a lot
Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-05-16 08:14 PM


Beautiful Marge!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus
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10 posted 2003-05-16 09:33 PM


Shhhhh,  lets start a train....only we have
to move very quietly!!

Enjoyed the view Marge...very nice.

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-05-16 09:37 PM


So beautiful, Marge.  

Ssshhhhhhh......


Hugs,
Ethel

teledon
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12 posted 2003-05-16 10:24 PM


the Bard said "Brevity is the soul of wit" .. you went him one better .. you wrote a lovely piece, and did it in very few words .. Bravo!

"keep it simple"

regards2you
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13 posted 2003-05-17 02:55 PM




Marge,


I love this. Meadows and peace of mind seem to go together. So well written.

Just beautiful, Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Patricia
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14 posted 2003-05-17 03:22 PM


Now I find an inner hush in the chaos within me.  This is beautiful...calming, soothing.

Thank you,

-Patricia

QjQ
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15 posted 2003-05-17 03:43 PM


i really love your thoughts on this one!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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16 posted 2003-05-18 10:00 AM


Yesterday, Hon and I went to a huge nursery north of us and it's surrounded by rocky ledge and meadows and woods. It was so peaceful and relaxing to just 'be.'
I can imagine that your meadow is much the same way, minus all the shoppers.

And, no rose similar to your beauty. I give up and can only hope you will continue to share yours with me.

I did however, get my Japanese Maple tree. I am so excited!

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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