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streetx
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since 2003-05-16
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0 posted 2003-05-16 02:38 AM


i left for hurry, hurries sake
slave to oceanography
couldn't be far now
i dont know

ride the twisted carousel
choose the words and write them down
wouldnt you know
they were wrong

so i tried it all back again
found your name and wrote it down
still i think i
lost the sound

save my heart it's almost gone
melt it down and mold it up
isnt it pretty now
with your art

and mail me once a month or so
let me know you are still alive
ill write your name down
and be lost.

and thats the way the cycle spins
tear the frame and rip it up
pictures we took
when in love

--
patrick j. hills
aircrashEXIT.



© Copyright 2003 streetx - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-05-16 05:16 AM


kind of sad here...but I liked it

Welcome to Passions...looking forward to more from you

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-05-16 05:18 AM


Patrick -

this is amazing . . .
was just looking at all of those myself
the other day and yes - it is quite amazing
sad . . .

Welcome to PIP!
You will love it here
xxoo

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2003-05-16 08:24 AM


As the ocean's tides ebb and flow... Welcome to Passions in Poetry, streetx - This is a wonderful place to share your work and enjoy others' poetry.  Settle in and make yourself comfy.

Check your email for a special greeting as well...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-05-16 09:07 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I'm looking forward so reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2003-05-16 09:11 AM


Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I know you'll enjoy it here!

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack
6 posted 2003-05-17 01:42 AM


I still cant look at those pictures

welcome to passions
looking forward to more from you

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-05-17 07:52 AM



Welcome to Passions!  
I'm going to enjoy reading your poetry!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2003-05-17 11:36 AM


ride the twisted carousel
choose the words and write them down
wouldnt you know
they were wrong
******************************************
WELCOME to a passionate poet's carousel ride.
enjoyed the write

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-05-17 04:23 PM






(big hugggssssssss) This is a sad but wonderfully written debut, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and know love and memories can cross any ocean, here's angel hugs for you, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Patrick, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fantastic poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patrick, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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