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Fancy Dancer |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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You are my fancy dancer lover of my life the hummer of my heart who handles me with care. A delicate spin through gentle cycles filled with steaming heat extra capfuls soften me dripping down to dry. Blowing through a steady vent hot water runs into my blush a rush beneath my skirt lifting up the sky to fly. Flirting with my petticoats a rumble tumble in the breeze turning somersaults around leaves a dampness in between. Hung loosely in my tangle waving through cotton fields blows a steady quiet sound folded neatly in your hold. Lying beneath layers you are the static cling the warm feel of my lusting dressng up my sun days fit to be tied by night~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Flirting with my petticoats a rumble tumble in the breeze turning somersaults around leaves a dampness in between. Veerrrrrrrryyyyyyy goooooood! Love the images here m'dear  Maree. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bluesie, ========================== Lying beneath layers you are the static cling the warm feel of my lusting dressng up my sun days fit to be tied by night~ ========================== Awww...you do set that romantic mood that makes me into a puddle. What more could I ask for?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damned interesting laundry days you have! Wow! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You do this kind better than anybody! Bravo! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
..... cough.... .... (clearing throat sound) .... sorry... trying to catch my breath... ackhh! BluesSerenade, your poem made me feel like a young boy, sneaking into his first R rated movie... My cheeks are all flushed! If I ever read a more sensual poem before... It’s just been replaced, by this one... You have a wonderful talent... Any guy who doesn’t save this one, had better check his pulse! Thanks BluesSerenade... Richy |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Blues Serenade...A very steamy, hot poem; but done with such finesse that you don't realize quite what you're reading. You are truly a gifted writer. ***Ivy Rose |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Damn Bluesy *smiling* this is sooo awesome . . . laundry will never be quite the same for me after this . . . lol tweets xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as I was reading I almost thought it would have to be moved to "adult", but you pulled it off Good writing hugs M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-16-2003 10:19 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Had to say...I so enjoyed this write. There is plenty to be said for static cling... EXCELLENT! TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm saving this for sure! IWIHWT !!! ...there!--securely bedded down in my secret place of special somethin's!  May your day be full joy! Linda |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You made my heart soar like a hawk. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ 'Hung loosely in my tangle waving through cotton fields blows a steady quiet sound folded neatly in your hold.' EXQUISITELY done~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 outstanding! so playful! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Wishing I was a petticoat  , love this.Jason |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now Bluesygirl....this is going directly into my library! Wow. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OOOH Lori!! Softly sensual...very much enjoyed.. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - oh my, blushing in the tub... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Many thanks to each and every one of you. I wasn't sure if I could pull this off, I guess it's a wash when it's worded right. Yep, my muse is back, fancy that! Thank you again for taking the time. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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