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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

0 posted 2003-05-15 08:43 PM

Just  a repost to let you all know I'm still here and breeze in and out of Passions from time to time. The new job is going well, but keeping me quite busy as I have 2 1/2 hours of driving time just to get there and back now. Missing you all :[

Dancing In Your Eyes

I saw you across the room;
blonde hair tossed from the wind
and you laughed as you shook your head
casting off the remnants of the downpour outside.
You turned towards me and the lights danced
in your brown eyes
sending a thousand messages in a single glance.

A slow song played as you reached for my hand
and led me to the dance floor pulling me closer
until I felt like an extension of you.
The beating of my heart keeping tempo
to the rhythm of the music as I danced,
lost in your eyes,
while the world blurred and disappeared around us.

And tonight, a lifetime lived in only short months,
kneeling, you smile at me as in your outstretched hand
you shakingly present a diamond offering
and your breath stills while you wait
for an affirmation of our love that so openly dances,
reflected in your eyes,
then tumbles out in liquid mirrors at the simple word,
“Yes.”

~ Ruth

If God brings you to it, He will bring you through it.

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (05-15-2003 08:44 PM).]

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

1 posted 2003-05-15 08:58 PM

This is so charming! Nothing is quite as precious as the first moments, be they minutes, hours or days, of new love. You've shown us that with tender words. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-05-15 08:59 PM

Sounds like the dance of a lifetime... and you know it's good to see you - Glad all's well...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-05-15 09:02 PM

Beautiful, Ruth
*s
glad to know you are doing well
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-05-15 09:19 PM

(smiles) Oh Ruth, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I dream of a day like this when I can present my hand to my love, yay, this is a jewel, God Bless You, I hope soon the schedule improves as we all miss you too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ruth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2003-05-15 11:16 PM

Glad to hear things are going well, Ruth. 2 1/2 hours??

Bummer!!

Great to see you!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-05-18 03:24 AM

That is sure a long drive.....
One good thing about that though is that it gives you a lot of time to think and reflect on life. I'd been wondering where you were. I'd noticed you hadn't been posting and hoped that you were ok. I'm happy to see that all is well. I'm glad your job is going well too.
And that is a very lovely dance.....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-05-18 04:28 AM

wow! what a drive! please be careful and share with us when you can

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2003-05-18 08:09 AM

My mind trips back to the first few moments with him. The whole night slowly unfolds in my mind. Ah...those first few moments, nothing can compare. Thank goodness those moments are permanently and sweetly transcribed in our memory. And thank goodness poems like yours exist to bring our memories of those moments to the forefront of our mind.

This is beautiful.

-Patricia

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2003-05-19 09:28 AM

Great to see you my friend. I have missed you as well.

Very nice, romantic piece.

Marilyn

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-05-19 06:01 PM

yes, missed your poetry

but enjoyed this much

hugs to you

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