Open Poetry #26 |
As Poets Pass.. |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Time brings to air the fall of leaves as poets write and poets die. Where words are written of one’s soul on feathered wings as eagles fly. Words of soft verse, of prose and rhyme Ever so light or brazen, bold. Thoughts that lie quiet among the leaves waiting to be touched, held and told. Light the whispers of frosted breath upon the pane of once clear glass. As shimmers shake the shadows nigh and lines do come as time does pass. Softly the flake now falls to earth as words are made in scrawl of snow Becoming a flow of waters pure as poets quill in words that flow. A stream carries to rolling sea passages written 'neath blue sky. Thoughts and visions so aptly read as poets live....as poets die... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Magnus, You know there are just so many poems that are posted on this wonderful site, that it is almost impossible to find the time to respond to them all.. And that is a real shame... But your poem here is really amazing... Your words floated like a feather in the wind, bouncing on by, ever so gracefully... I found it magnificent! Absolutely Superb! Richy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for sharing this thought, Barry. It made me think of Madame Chipmunk. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You know I love your p-o-e-t-r-y! You touch deep... Warm hugs, Linda |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Barry, I had the same reaction as Kacy. This is so well-written...it touches deeply... Hugs, Pat |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Softly the flake now falls to earth as words are made in scrawl of snow Becoming a flow of waters pure as poets quill in words that flow Barry this is exquisite. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Barry...and it did remind me of Lyra. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Magnus, now where is the "click" button? Please please please...when Passions comes forth with its fourth...tell me you will submit! I mean, submit this poem! Please! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To all....thank you...and yes, I thought of her too... gosh... now the misty eyes... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write as always It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Poignant and beautiful, Magnus. Cor |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gee, this is so sad...but a beautiful write, and I hold it in my heart... as I do you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mannn Barry - this has an old world feel to it . . . quite amazing xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ 'Time brings to air the fall of leaves as poets write and poets die. Where words are written of one’s soul on feathered wings as eagles fly.' Gently reminded me of 'My Warrior'- Soaring Eagle~ Also of Lyra and of Wilfred Yeats~ Thank you for this tender penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . .poets live. . . but, I don't know that they ever really die. . . but, I understand what you mean Magnus. . . well done Sir. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Great images. It is always polite to wave as poets pass. Thank you for sharing this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
I love the rhyme scheme here. This kinda relates to a story that I read today, and one of the messages that stuck with me is that 'everyone's a poet'. This is great work. ^~^If we cannot live so as to be happy, let us least live so as to deserve it.~*~ Immanuel Hermann Fichte [This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (05-16-2003 08:39 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...I think a poet lives forever, at least words can, and some do...this brought a tear to my eye for those poets from Passions that have died. |
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