Open Poetry #26 |
I was... |
dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I was... Loved Needed Wanted Destiny I was... Bold strong Caring Spontaneous I was... Sure Unique Passionate Irreplaceable I was... Wrong . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The only wrong would have been, to not let yourself feel these things... You can never be wrong, by feeling human... I like your style Dream! Richy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I was saddened by this, but glad to see you let it spill down the page in release. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So much said in so few words... I'm so sorry you were hurt...not wrong..hurt. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh God, this hurts |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
it sure hurts... regards sudhir |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
thank you everyone - it hurt to write but it had to come out I truly apreciate your reading & commenting [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (05-17-2003 01:51 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream: ohhh curse the woman you are better than this and maybe it is her that was . . . this does hurt A LOT xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . this needs to breathe . . . |
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