Open Poetry #26 |
Gaea |
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Gaea When you scream about the war-fires raging, when you cry aloud, “ The world’s in chains”, I will sing along with sparrows, I will send a sparkling rain. Rail about sin and corruption, I’ll reply with crystal dew. List the deaths of unborn children- What can I say? That’s up to you. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Nan! How goes it? Been missing you--and this poem is an example of why! Great little write that says a great deal! It's so frightenly true! Keep singing with the sparrows! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks, EA! I've been busy, busy, busy, but now for a few days maybe I can hang around. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I liked the rhyming scheme, Nan. Am I wrong to believe that there seems to be a philosophical quandry in your words dealing with those who don't believe in death and war, but support abortion, or did I am off-base? Enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeyFriendGal~ This flows in a wisdom drip of lilting refrain~ A really nice 'read aloud' piece~ Good to see you gal ! Hope ya' stick around ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Opeth- To quote Mary Poppins, "Let me make this perfectly clear, I never explain anything." You have to say that with an English accent or it doesn't work. My Texas drawl never quite makes it. I'm glad to hear from you. Marge, I hope to be able to hang for a few days anyway. I'll try to catch up. You should fill me in on all the gossip, you know. :p Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It is indeed nice to see you, pilgrim variety... and with such a great poem - This piece teems with wisdom, m'friend... The "Other Variety"... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
great write!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Starkly and beautifully said....thank you for sharing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Nan (of the other sort! ), it's good to have some time to spend here. QjQ, I don't know about great, but thanks! Ratleader, thanks for replying-I'm glad you got something out of it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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