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Production Line (Scenes from the Highway)
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Production Line (Scenes from the Highway) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Conveyor belt black moving tins of people in pre-packaged lifestyles |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I love that... morning rush hour watching those "happy" people I lmao and usually sing & make faces just to irritate them - [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-16-2003 10:24 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn dude! That about sums it up, eh? |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raphey, you can sure tell it like it is. Hey, you're good at writing these short writes. Why don't you go add something onto the "add-on" thing I just started? Hugs, Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hanging out at the mall, dude? smile... You know I love these snippets of insight. You have an edge with social commentary that I adore, Raph. (helps that I agree with ya too, huh?) HUGS |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Grin its fun to irritate them isn't it? Thanks dreambuilder Ed I think so Thanks Ethel and done in fact the one I psted for you could be one of my favourites No malls, stuck in highway traffic watching faces and gestures and wondering why they never show this in car commercials, thaks for agreeing it proves i'm not crazy..or that I'm not alone in being so.. grin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very observant Raphael...I admire your perception |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . far from alone Raph when I read this I thought: plastic people driving nowhere really smiling plastered faces in their own reality this is good - I will never look at traffic the same again tyvm xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why is it I suddenly have a hankering for sardines?  On spot, Raph! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
bump |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Dixie most round here call it madness Thanks Sue I also thought of Police's "Packed like lemmings into shiny metal boxes" from synchronicity II Karilea one word..eeeeeeeeeeew. thanks for the reply I'll pass on little salty hairy fishies Dream much appreciated |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 found this way back in the back |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A great poetic statement. Some of my favorite memories from my wandering days are of riding past a city or a town just at day break. Looking at the commuters intently focused on the beginning of their day, I would always laugh because I knew before they got back to their little boxes I would be hundreds of miles away. Thank you for making those memories surface. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent imagery Sir Raph! Enjoyed! Maree  |
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