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Open Poetry #26

Streamlets in the Key of ee...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-05-13 09:27 PM

I.
Winter's ice entombed the pond,
'til spring's arrival set it free.

II.
No one heard stream's current calling,
except perhaps a nearby tree.

III.
A catfish sat on river's bottom,
until a young boy yelled in glee.

IV.
Dropped mountain brook in headlong rush,
to distant womb of mother sea.

V.
Old man river's soul be dammed,
by a concrete devil, no where to flee.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-05-13 10:49 PM

Clever works...
Would read well without the Roman...but then, liked the spice. TD

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

2 posted 2003-05-14 02:59 PM

Separately independent,
but working well together.

Could we ask anything less
of one another?

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-05-16 06:28 PM

You hear beautiful whispers ....
Loved all of these streamlets very much.
Love, Margherita

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