Open Poetry #26 |
Streamlets in the Key of ee... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I. Winter's ice entombed the pond, 'til spring's arrival set it free. II. No one heard stream's current calling, except perhaps a nearby tree. III. A catfish sat on river's bottom, until a young boy yelled in glee. IV. Dropped mountain brook in headlong rush, to distant womb of mother sea. V. Old man river's soul be dammed, by a concrete devil, no where to flee. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Clever works... Would read well without the Roman...but then, liked the spice. TD |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Separately independent, but working well together. Could we ask anything less of one another? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You hear beautiful whispers .... Loved all of these streamlets very much. Love, Margherita |
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