Open Poetry #26 |
I Got Mooned |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I got mooned last night on my way home. I was minding my own business, the book I was reading was finished, I didn't mean to stare, but he was just hanging there head tilted a little, his countenance made me think he was enjoying his view as much as I, mine. I saw a couple others stop and stare, too, right in the middle of their work. Looking up at the sky, taking in the clean, stark white of it. The sun was slipping between layers of gilt-edged clouds on the the horizon of the western sky. But from the east, he hung there, smiling, almost as if he was tipping an imaginary hat. Yep, I got mooned on my walk home. This time of year, the moon can be so powerfully beautiful. Don't you agree? ©April 16, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love your sassy titles! You really are a character--and a fine poet! Warm hugs, EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This made me smile. I agree with Linda, your titles just draw me in. This is wonderful, I really enjoyed the read. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"I Got Mooned"! Of course I had to read it. Enjoyed it, too. And it's really hangin' out there tonight! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YES..I AGREE. This had such a detached air of whimsy and amusement but not without thought-- grin... adored this from you! A playful write from you, and I hope to see more...(er, not that much more, but yanno what I mean!) *wink* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cute, thanks for sharing |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
LOL this was great... I love the moon Connie |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Virginia, I missed your "getting mooned" when it went around earlier. LOL But, I found it ths time. I'm glad that I did. This is so cute, Lady. Hugs, Ethel |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
lol I didn't know what to expect when I opened this. I love it when I get mooned this time of year also. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh yes indeedeee...I do agree Virginia... And I was thinking you had really gotten the other moon...Liked this one.. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, yep, yep...saw it but never thought about being m o o n e d...absoutely wonder piece and fantastic way of putting it...very original.... jwesley |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hi Vassy! Hasn't been the same without you. This was great...verve, and vigor, and the hint of romance...Great write. TD |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
There is nothing like a full moon. Thanks for sharing this. |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Very Cute! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
lol, cute I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - I sure do agree, this one threw me a little until the end. Clever write... BC |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Somehow didn't imagine you writing about the "other" moon, so had to read. Enjoyed this twist. kraw' |
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