Open Poetry #26 |
if ever you fall |
tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
“If Ever You Fall” to: you I wish there was something I could say to make everything all right I wish I could do so much more to see you smile make you laugh how do you stand when everything falls how do you wake up each day see the light at the end of the deep dark tunnel keep your head above water while everyone drowns you are so brave and strong I know you don’t want my pity my hugs but still I’m sorry have nothing to say silence speaks volumes tears flood the halls but here is my hand if ever you need it if ever you fall never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
||
© Copyright 2003 The Jessica - All Rights Reserved | |||
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You know Jess - this is beautiful reminds a lot of being online because a lot of times there is nothing but words even though those words mean SOOOO much many times you just can quell that pain is lovely and you are quite compassionate xxoo |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
an awesome write, very comforting |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A fantastic formation of words...James |
||
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderfully heartfelt piece, ts... |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |