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Before Thine Eyes
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Before Thine Eyes |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Before Thine Eyes I lay me down before thine eyes, the whole of me, laid bare, the heart and soul of me, open for you to see. I hold out everything for which I care, all the love that I can share, the life that He has given me, I offer thee. w.james beard, jr. (c)june 2003 |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely piece, full of emotion. There is nothing more you can offer someone than your all. Very nice expression.  Julie |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The imagery was great. But the poem itself was beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very heartfelt write Jimmy. Well done indeed...much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"the heart and soul of me, open for you to see. I hold out everything for which I care, all the love that I can share," *sigh* who could ask for more?! loved this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so very tender, warm |
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