Open Poetry #26 |
Grains of Love |
scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Grains of Love We walked hand in hand ...along the beach. Two people amid the antiquity of time ...measured by pebbles and sand. She asked how long would I love her ...not sure of my answer. I reached down and picked up a rounded gray stone ...placing it in her hand. "My love for you today will be as strong... when sand is all that's left of this stone." ...I said quietly. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (05-12-2003 07:40 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio, a beautiful honest answer to her question. I love this as it is exquisite in its simplicity... Born from a sincere question..an answer of deep devotion. She certainly is one lucky woman. Very nicely penned with the perfect accompanying picture. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Spectacular in it's simple promise of lasting love. Much enjoyed. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
scorpio, I simply adore this posting! The photo and the timeless sentiments...So beautiful! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Wonderful write enjpoyed the read very much. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
scorpio - oh yes, this is nice, very nice... BC |
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Yitzy Junior Member
since 2003-05-12
Posts 30 |
very nice, this poem evoked serene images as I read it. The picture served as a theme throughout. I liked to imagine myself as the persona while I read your poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful, dreamy piece scorpio. Enjoyed. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Nancy, I'm indeed the lucky one...and my devotion to this lady is deep and lasting...I'm glad you enjoyed the write and the picture.. Thank you Kathleen...I appreciate your comments.. Simple works best for me, Linda...straight and to the point...thank you.. Most kind comments, Sy...I thank you... Thank you, Bill...glad you stopped in.. Yitzy, I'm pleased you projected yourself into the poem and picture...it's good to know the levels on which it worked.. Yes Chris, it has a dream-like quality...I just wish I was on that beach with my lady now.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I agree with Enchantress.... A keeper!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Forever is good. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"My love for you today will be as strong... when sand is all that's left of this stone." ...I said quietly. Scorpio, This is absolutely beautiful. Exactly like the beautiful words that my Love writes for me. I know that your Love treasures your words as much as I treasure the words of my Love. Thank you for sharing your heart. Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-13-2003 09:34 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, I liked the photo and the poem so much, I'm keeping both! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for the bump Enchantress...much appreciated!! Thank you Bridgette...your kind support means alot to me.. Forever is very good...thank you, Karilea.. Thank you, Ethel...may you and Gary enjoy each other's devotion forever.. Glad you found both the poem and the picture to your liking...Midnitesun.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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