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He Fancies Himself
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He Fancies Himself |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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He Fancies Himself... He fancies himself a thinker, but refuses to hear her ideas. He fancies himself a philosopher, but refuses to discuss her logic. He fancies himself a writer, but refuses to read her poetry. He fancies himself a lover, but refuses to accept her affection. A boulder of granite is he, Mortared in rigidity, Bedded in self philosophy. I think that it be Only he Whom he does fancy. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Patricia...I agree 1000 percent on your poem....excellently stated...and seeing as how he never reads poetry...he surely cannot reply in his defense.....Something tells me he will lose!!! Nice write!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't they call that hard headed...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write..much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
GRIN... My dear, You expressed this very well...and you know, each is a work of art...in progress. Nice Write! Winks, ThisDiamond |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Patricia, I know the type well... I think many of us do... Your poetry always, tickles my fancy... Richy |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
Unfortunately, that's how some men are. This is gonna be added to my library. +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh Pat, Laughing right out loud..you go, girl! Love this....keep writing it, it just gets better, were that possible. Though not a laughing matter when wedded (attached) to such, my heart goes out to you as you continue to cut the dead-ly ties that bind so tightly. You are right, you know, in every line of this poem, you have captured many. Very well-written. Heart hugs and love to you, Pat  |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Patricia, A liked this poem a lot Good play of contradictory statements in your couplets here. I think you describe the ultimate fool here! *hugs* Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know you know I know...  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah...then you should fancy another perhaps..lol |
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