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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-05-12 02:42 AM

strong enough
  to make diamond

bleed lime into
cavern
       us

drip
     tell
drip

           me
drip

        that
drip
            it

drip
        is
drip
            okay

I would grow
through
the sound
of your
years

meet me you
in the
dark inbetween

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-05-12 03:46 AM

sigh~ how beautiful...loved the presentation

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-05-12 06:25 AM

I have been in those caves...
where mystery was born.

Excellent presentation!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-05-12 06:40 AM

Well done -- classic ekphrasis (for which I am a fool!) and a message that goes right to the center of me as well.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2003-05-12 07:24 AM

very nice...

regards
sudhir

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2003-05-12 09:40 AM

wow

thank you people!

ekphrasis?
scratching head..
that has a name?
smile

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-05-12 09:43 AM

Brian

"I would grow
through
the sound
of your
years"

Beautiful!!!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2003-05-12 09:59 AM

It is more than "okay"

you...amaze

beautiful words--beautiful poet

(crazy viking)

I'll see you in the dark inbetween...

(serenity looks both ways)

sneak attack

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2003-05-12 11:13 AM

bonk

               I
    bang
          keep

bonk
         bumping

bounce

      into

  ouch
         those

bonk
      things
crash

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

9 posted 2003-05-12 01:58 PM

Such an interesting write here.

It made me think of the wait before dark which can be a torturous time indeed.

Enjoyed!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-05-12 02:19 PM

Smiling at Bri's andiwork and laughing at Ed's

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-05-13 12:30 PM

bri - this is amazing  - awesome write
(I can hear those drips) and it is lovely and Ed lol - you two guys . . .  no fair having so much fun

I loved this
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-14-2003 01:39 AM).]

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

12 posted 2003-05-13 12:50 PM

Very interesting!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-05-13 02:22 AM

I love it! ah, remembering Moaning Cave

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