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P.R.C Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40Hull, England |
One minute you're happy The next you're sad I wish we could be together, living carefree To think someone has hurt you, or annoyed you, makes me so mad Why wont you let me help you when youre down? You know I will always be around Just for you To help you get through Every twist and turn Never going to leave you, so I will never return I would be yours just like that I wouldnt care where we was at As long as I was with you Holding you close whenever you was blue Telling you that I love you and need you I would wait forever to hear you say that you do too Not a minute of the day goes by When I dont sigh or want to cry Cause Im not by your side I try to run, I try to hide Try to keep everything inside Not even telling you how I feel Cause Im not sure you could deal With what I feel day after day Scared of what you would say Afraid that you would go And I wouldnt be able to follow I need you more than anything And in my heart I am aching More than I ever have before Time carries on, still I need you more I love you You know its true Just never forget |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The aching and longing are very touching.... Very heartfelt write.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
The want to be with someone is such a familiar feeling to me, I can truely relate to this peom, thank you for sharing! :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, I can definitely relate, on both sides |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done and much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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