Open Poetry #26 |
Empty Toll |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Empty Toll the heart is a lonely bell that rings in empty toll hollow notes echo in such silence thundering metal upon metal of deliberate swinging of side to side hammer hitting space hard till surface is thin just clamoring to be heard |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love this: "hammer hitting space hard" Who knew that nothing could hurt so bad. *heart-hugs* my friend... and yes, this cup SHALL pass. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"just clamoring to be heard" I can hardly wait to get to your last lines. Always something to look forward to. You've done it again! SAG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love how you say things H |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Love that image, the clapper pounding a thin spot on the bell -- so clear a picture of the feeling.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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