Open Poetry #26 |
Evening rain |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Passion spills like an evening rain filling every nook and cranny causing in each a subtle change Unknown results from this future venture yet the pull is strong tugging me along words within words mean so much as I avoid your touch cool as the water that falls from the sky My wants are far from my needs the volume starts to exceed the capacity flooding everything close to me I am struggling not to drown our love Save me for I cannot save us flow into me with your passionate touch let us blend into one and allow the return of the setting sun ceasing the evening rain let us be us once again |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thomas, this one has a lot of hurt in it. Even though it is sad, though, it is beautiful, too. Thanks for sharing it. Hugs, Ethel |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
let us blend into one and allow the return of the setting sun ceasing the evening rain let us be us once again This was amazing.. I am literally speachless. BlueEyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas: absolutley lovely this is amazing let us be us once again hope so xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this tears me up |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Please no crying Positive energy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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