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Of Springtime and You |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Supple The softness of your lips As mine touched them Wanting to crush you to me But only gently brushing you As I bent my head to you. I felt the sway in you And my own curve of soul As I straightened An apology now ready To cross my tongue For being so bold Forming somewhere In doubt then thought of tall grass And how it lays in winds too strong For stiffer trees and straightens itself Amid the splinters Of those things Broken by passing Storms And I Grew green [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (05-09-2003 09:55 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Never apologize for kissing beauty... instead, a tip of your hat, a wink and a smile, and she will be forever grateful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You, dear man, are a POET! Warm hugs, EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...The feeling of this is just lovely!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sunshine... thank you for the thoughts..perhaps the wink and smile of me need practice..lol EA... thank you kindly...though I do not consider myself to be a poet, just a scribbler of thoughts. your kindness is appreciated. martie.. glad you liked..and a hug back at ya... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captain, I am about as easy-going and agreeable a person as you will ever meet, BUT, I must disagree with your undervaluation of your poetic talent! You ARE a POET.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
EA... thank you. there are some lines i read once about a person who spent a lifetime doing something he enjoyed and meant something t him and in his will, he stated all the remains from his efforts were to be destroyed. The thought being that they represented something once he was gone that he could not control the use of or misuse and they were a part of him,and to misuse them was to make what he knew they were to be a lie... that is a poet... and me? lol..I am not sure I have the same love for what I write or do... so to me it would seem I am not a poet, but a scribe of some sort that lacks the proper appreciation of the craft. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is lovely, growing green in seasons....just bending with the wind....but not breaking... but, I must say I think petrified wood quite pretty...those splinters have souls of their own, too. Sometimes, brokeness has its own green. But am glad the storms passed in this case. Lovely images...again....you are on a roll. Actually, you never stop and BTW, angels don't lie. Linda is right! Hugs, Pat  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Ron...absolutely beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
then thought of tall grass And how it lays in winds too strong For stiffer trees and straightens itself Amid the splinters Of those things Broken by passing Storms funny how the humble lowly grass prevails against its stronger counterparts your ending lines were rather sweet and endearing i'm not too concerned about your identity though, as long as you write on!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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