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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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When you climb on me a throaty woman growls and rides me, I am a tree taken by a storm wind shaken to its roots; when you fall on me in tiny child whispers you are done, I am the earth holding you safe, welcoming you home. ©2003 by icebox |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
To feel like that at a time like that is amazing! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ice: a most poetic description of a beautiful moment nicely done xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! it's hot in here... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you for your kind comments. I hope you all have a wonderful weekend. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was making a metaphor meltdown for sure!  Enjoyed this very much, and love how your mind worked in this one. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the wonderful feelings you conjure about love, sweet friend, it is like a seed to the earth that blooms not annually but perennially and can hope so many other things! (big hugggsssssss) May your love always be sheltered upon your Earth, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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