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Falling Hearts
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Falling Hearts |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
Housed within desires Lusting to fulfill The temptations latched To the black heart inside Cold as withered snowflakes Scars running through its veins The memories lavished among it A portrayal of misfortune The chains that wrap its core Pulling down to dark embarkments Coated by the night's atmosphere All to be alone Try to hold securely A loss of false fulfillment As the beat begins to fade Obscurity written among its skin Discomfort rains along its edges Shadows form to welcome The falling to a broken heart The display to blind mistake And the inability to see past it all. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
There are some things that happen to us in our lives that we will never ever forget. I think this is one of them for you. In time, it may be possible to accept it but it will always be there. Just remember, you are the better person in this. Good write. All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LastMoments~ 'cold as withered snowflakes' Now THAT leaves an impression, for sure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Cold as withered snowflakes" BRRR! I felt the chill of this line. A well written chill.  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
It is amazing how somethings in our lives just stay with us forever...I have learned that if I can move forward from the pain it has often taught me a lesson and made me a better person....I know only too well about Falling Hearts...just remember there are Healing Hearts as well.... |
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