Open Poetry #26 |
Dear Friend |
Shyann2003 New Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 1 |
Dear Friend Friend, you mean everything to me I just wish I could of told you that But it is way to late, and your already gone I wish that I was there I wish that I could tell you everything that I neve had a chance to say There is just so much pain and way too much sadness I have been trying to get over you but every time i see your face or hear your name, I start to cry Every night I pray and make a wish on just one little star that I would be there with you. I always woundered what was on your mind. Sometimes I look up at the sky an ask "Why?" There is just one thing that I want you to do is promise me that when my time comes, will you wait up there for me? |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
beautiful, and I hope you find your friend...or at least find there heart, great way of expressing yourself through poetry, keep up the good work! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is sad, too true for so many...myself included, but it is certainly a piece of yourself...that is expressed very beautifully. Welcome to Passions... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Welcome to Passions~ Heartfelt here. A wonderful first post. Look forward to more of your poetry. Hugs, Pat |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Shyann, welcome to Passions! Your debut poem is a real tear-jerker! Powerful yet sensitively written. Sad, but very beautiful. Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS !! ENJOYED YOUR FIRST POST. CHRIS "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shyann: Welcome to PIP! What a beautiful entrance and your write . . . ahhh - we all know this I do believe nice job xxoo |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh what a sad tragedy... one can really feel the sincerity in your writing... I hope time helps... It ususally does... Welcome to PIP! Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw gawd! I love this! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Shyann. We always question our losses, and at times, we find our answers. You're going to enjoy Passions...if you have any questions regarding our rules and guidelines, do not hesitate to ask. In the meantime, please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is full of sadness but yet there remains a whispering hope!!!! Welcome To Passions!!!! Hope you enjoy it here!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) This is a sad but beautiful debut, dearest friend, I too think we question ever too much why the ones we love and cherish so dear have to go one time or another and though I know the aching will always be with you, that your friend will always love you and you will see your friend again, God Bless You, we are all here for you and send angel hugs your way! Welcome to Passions, sweet Shyann, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shyann, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
If you believe in another realm after this one, it's never too late to say the words I care, I love you, I forgive....or whatever was left unsaid on earth. Welcome to Pips! celebrating your entrance to a new poetry home [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-10-2003 11:10 AM).] |
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