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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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Netherlands

0 posted 2003-05-08 06:54 PM

I thought of you, in moonlight's silver glow
This memory I drew out from the past
A picture blurred and not framed neat at all
But it's still mine and I think it will last

It's been long time and you might not recall
Those lovely moments, there were only few
I was in love and think you might have been
We were as pure as like new morning's dew

I wonder now how you would look today
We've aged in years and I forgot your name
You kissed me, when our teach was reading loud
And I, back then, I felt just like a dame

It didn't last, you left me in the cold
You were seven, and I was six years old

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2003-05-08 10:39 PM

LOL! It is really interesting to wonder what happened to those "first" loves we had when we were nothing more than little children, pictures of innocence, starting out in life.

You paint a very nice picture, Titia....one to get the memory muscles working...thank you

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-05-08 10:43 PM

Some early memories are so bright and clear...
Thank you for sharing this.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2003-05-09 04:17 AM

enjoyed this memory

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-05-09 01:08 PM

AwwwwwTitiaGal~
This is just delightful~
And .... you got your Workshop homework done sooooooooo quickly~
That's an A+ by itself !!!

(nah, not me ... the 'Doctor' sent in a note so I don't hafta do this month's assignment.)

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-05-10 05:02 PM

(smiles) Oh Titia, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have not seen a first love yet and I want so badly to know what it feels like, this is sooooooo adorable, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-05-10 05:05 PM

This is so lovely!
A Kindergarten love, so sweet.
Love, Margherita

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-05-10 05:09 PM

enjoyed

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2003-05-11 09:09 AM

What a beautiful sonnet. Titia.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-05-11 10:48 AM

So glad this was popped back up to the top, Titia...we wonder where they are now, and even wonder if they wonder, too...

Frank Tymon
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since 2003-05-11

Posts 27
California, USA

10 posted 2003-05-11 02:08 PM

Been there. Done that. Ah, the dreams of youth . . .

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-05-25 04:36 AM

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