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in spite of you
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in spite of you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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My hurt. I feel thatdrifting of my nail... My hurt. I'm real. thatdrifting thoughtofsnail... My burn. I realize that I decide, I never really realized- I am halfway actualized.... as these thoughts of me beat through-- little fists of rage broken tiles of age pounding for the very grout of you... as these thoughts of us we dig little gifts of us we lift showing worms beneath us all? to think, to dream we once stood tall. in spite of you? yeah....? (in spite of you) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God K, that's graphic! very vivid and heart breaking |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
In spite of anyone or anything else... We always have our own inner strength, don't we? You've got it, serene one...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Real raw writing, Karen! Grabbed me in the solar plexus--and in my heart. You can never lose the you of you--so you're never really alone in this life! You have your best friend with you wherever you may go! ---Take good care of her--she's special! Healing hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You turned over a rock and hit a homerun. LOL  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My hurt. I'm real. thatdrifting thoughtofsnail... ~*~ I love the double innuendo of this.... Excellent word play, m'dear... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity--The scratch of life is one way to feel the real...but in you I see it strong and true under the skin, in heart.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K: in spite of (you) . . . you will always rise like the sun . . . nice self pat on the back here good for you xxoo |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Inspite of you...ther will always be a ME.!  quatro |
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