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When You Are Gone
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When You Are Gone |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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When You Are Gone did you know your portrait is painted across the night your face is on the stars where no sparkle misses my view so when you are gone the moon still whispers your name |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just awesome! as always! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This poem is a little shiny star itself!!! Neeraja |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gorgeous! Love, Margherita |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
love this one Helen... : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ty all connie email me |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< forward to reading more! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, I know this, Helen...even though my Love and I are together in heart every second, we are apart a lot physically. We honestly do see and hear the whispers of our love when we are apart. Hugs, Ethel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh. . . beat, beat my foolish heart. . . wonderful helen. . .just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is so beautiful! Eric |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
And this is very....you. Good write! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Short, simple, and beautiful. What more could your adoring public ask for? When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
had to feel this one again |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, Can I steal that thought?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
larry...anything i had...i would gladly share with you...h |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Beautiful Poem, the night sky can be so warming. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, and I am sure on the other side of the rainbow that special somebody sees your image too, like a hologram, radiating across the ceiling, shining in the moonlight seeping through the stained glass window! (big hugggssssssss) This is another classic sapphire, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
 trying not to cry...too close to the heart. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Helen, what a portait of pain you pen. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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