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Aerosol Of Regrets
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Aerosol Of Regrets ~*Marge Tindal*~ Thoughts propelled in widespread of night Aerosol of regrets … that we didn’t get it right Exploding into a vast abyss … All of the things I didn’t think I’d miss turn me around in regret Sadly I exhale … the memories realizing I’m not over you yet No more will my lips taste of your sweet kiss perhaps that is the saddest recall If I don’t count looking into your eyes … back when you were my all~ I could not fix, what I did not break so my heart … in gentle quake simply turned … and walked away~ But … ...……………...Oh, how I miss you this night~ ~Sometimes, it's just a poem~ Sometimes, not~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis "I could not fix, what I did not break" I have lived this, felt so keenly now again with your poem. Big hugs! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
that we didn't get it right~ Ahhhh... the despair of it... and while we are 'all' to each other, don't we fear that one day we will look back to the times when we could have got it right and yet in pain, we look back to pray (and cry) for the one chance that went amiss and curse ourselves for not getting that one thing right!!! ---------- ah!! life you hand over the chalice yet you tip the cup of joy with an edge of glass and a spot of venom that there is forever an even chance to win or lose and yet maybe what's lost is yet what is gained ah!! life you are your own regret and also your greatest joy ----------- well, don't know what to say... except that I always enjoy your writes... regards, sudhir |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~Sometimes, it's just a poem~ Sometimes, not~ It's a heart breaker either way. Beautifully penned Margie girl. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I could not fix, what I did not break"... This poem literally misted my eyes. Warm hugs, Linda |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Loved your title and the last phrase! quatro |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 just beautiful! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge so beautiful but sad written. Hope it is not you right? (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful imagery...beautifuly told. Eric |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Such a poignant write, but beautiful and haunting! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, perhaps it's a poem, perhaps not, but it is very sad either way. Sending loves and hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I appreciate you all. Sometimes life gives us memories to squeeze, and sometimes we just have to~ This one is really dedicated to my used-to-be, with many, many years of good remembers that rain down on us at the most unpredictable times~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I have a feeling it's also dedicated to a "someday-will-be".... and that the best of the memories will be renewed. That seems to be the way of it, though not always of course, but often enough to count. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ maybe ...  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I really love this Marge. It says so much. Love, Betty |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I could not fix, what I did not break How many times have I bloodied my head against a brick wall because of my refusal to accept just that? *S* I loved the title... loved every word of it. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks gals~ Just knowing this touched others ... touches me again~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...I have had some "Aersol Regrets"; but you have expressed what so many other women have felt with true grace and beauty of poetic expertise. Thanks, Marge. ***Ivy Rose |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hugging you, and missing the days when I just 'knew'. I hope all is well with you, friend.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Dearest Sis, Pray everything's OK. Life (so much of the time) is like a merry-go-round. Sometime falling off is good in the sense that you can get a good look at where you're going, or in other cases, not going. love dale |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, Marge, I haven't come here for so long, but Dale told me about this poem... The power of this pain moved me strongly ... it worries me for you. You have such a gift for writing, and have painted this hauntingly poignant poem with such clarity. In your heart there is such beauty. I'll keep you in my prayers. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ What a lovely, lovely comment. Thank you~ Vicky~ AND you will always 'know'~ 'Cause I tucked the bed covers in real tight~ Dale and Rosemary~ What loving friends you both are. Your concern for me is greatly appreciated. Just wanting you both to know that I am fine, really~ memories of the past take flight Touching this little heart of mine ending up in my rhyme~ This piece actually honors the first love of my life, the father of our four children. And though we are no longer 'together' ... a part of our hearts will always be 'together'~ We remain the bestest of friends~ I soooooooooooo appreciate you all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I'm just bumping this one for me~ Those of you who know me so well will understand the why of my heart~ ~*Me ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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