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Open Poetry #26
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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
0 posted 2003-05-06 10:51 PM


When I stop to watch my life
blow around me,
like devils in a desert wind,
I seem to be the glass
upon an etching of a world
of make believe.


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-05-06 11:47 PM

This is a fine stained glass of overlaying colors,
and very nicely put together icebox~
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
2 posted 2003-05-06 11:57 PM

Thank you.  Your opinion means a lot to me.  Thank you for reading.
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
3 posted 2003-05-07 12:45 PM

How very true, icebox.  I stopped last night to think that I just don't know what the truth is anymore.  My decision - keep moving!
icebox
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in the shadows
4 posted 2003-05-07 06:43 AM

Honeybunch~Good choice!  Thank you for reading.
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