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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Electric whirlpools rushing in a constant stream muscles tense and relax easing down into the flow. Sensations pulse with warmth that steams fluid moves and every simple touch of hand stirs my breath unevenly playing misty in my dreams. Pouring out desires that spill below the surface delighting in the flow of liquid swirls soaking up the pleasure of each jet releasing sluicing through the center of my being. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The reading feels so good, how do you ever get out of the pool? *smile* Whirlpools are beyond my experience, but I think now I understand them better. Thank you. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bluesie, ============================ playing misty in my dreams. ============================ Lucky guy!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh My! My glasses fogged over when I read this one... And I don’t even wear glasses! Phewww! BluesSerenade, this poem is sensational I’m saving this one for dang sure! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Big Grin... This is so cool. We must have been having similar thoughts this eve. Wonderful expression in such a sensual write. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! gorgeous write! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... as usual. got room in that tub for two?  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - I like playing misty in dreams, nice... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sounds dangerous -- a person could melt altogether in a place like that! And should! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Reads like mercury, nice job! Jason |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
another nice write. You can make any poem sensuous, ya know? hugs M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh my, Missy! Fogging up all the guy's computer screens! Grins at Ed's reply and Maureen is right on. You does these so well! Incredible talent... enjoyed, hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So this is why it's so foggy!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I want what you're having!!! hehe. enjoyed very much blues. Maree |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
oops! i just slipped deeper into to bubbling froth! Rf |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
May kind of poem that is for sure, and definitely my kind of scene. Great poem and I waved this one for again, and again. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lori, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love these wonderful feelings of being one in the whirlpool and finding myself sinking into my own Atlantis to see all the colors and swan songs never thought possible! (kiss on cheek) I love the spin in this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
shure rite knice layyyydee (wink) since you were close I had to tag ya dug it bluzy.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for jumping in everyone, it's been fun. I sure do appreciate you all!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*mouth shut* hehehehe this is amazing xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There you go, it's the first thing I learned, gotta hold your breath when you start going under. You're so sweet tweets~ thanks~ |
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